Bitte um Korrektur
gefunden am 12.11.2008Hallo, ich bin neu hier und leider noch unsicher was die englische Grammatik angeht. Wer kann mir helfen und meinen Brief korrigieren? Dear All, I would like to send you greetings from Hollywood. Two weeks ago we were flying from Frankfurt to Los Angeles. The flight was very long but comfortable because it was the business class in the aircraft. Our hotel is the five star hotel “Beverly Hilton”. From the guest rooms there is a nice view over L.A. and you can well relax in this hotel. There are a lot of restaurants and the food is very good. In the Spa after hotel you can swim or enjoy a massage. In the last weeks we have made a City Tour in Beverly Hills. We saw where the celebrities go shopping on Rodeo Drive in Beverly Hills. After that we cruised the Sunset Strip on the way to Hollywood where we stopped at the Chinese Theatre for a looked at the celebrities’ hand and foot prints. This is the famous “Walk of Fame”. By the end of this day was a stop on Mulholland Drive. There we had a spectacular view of L.A. We visited the Universal Studios. In these studios such movies like Jurassic Park, Terminator 2 and Shrek have been shot. Sometimes we went to the beach. The weather was really very warm. But the highlight of our trip was the Oscar-Show. We had an exclusive stretch limousine with own Chauffeur. A lot of many celebrities came und i’ve been in the midst of it all. It was like a dream. I met Leonardo di Caprio. He gave me an autograph on my shirt and I made a photo with him. Tomorrow I’m going to fly home. Yours sincerely
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